
John Wooden has worked on a diverse range of web projects for Fortune 500 companies and local, county, and state governments in his role as Fredrickson’s director of usability services. He has led website redesign and information architecture efforts, and conducted hundreds of usability tests and heuristic evaluations on both websites and applications. Behind the scenes, John has developed usability guidelines and interface design standards for applications and websites.
John has taught classes in usability and user-centered design at the University of Minnesota and has presented dozens of seminars on usability and web-related topics.
John has a PhD in English and is a Certified Usability Analyst and member of the Usability Professionals’ Association. He has been with Fredrickson Communications since 2000.
Resources
- Hammerich, Irene and Claire Harrison. 2001. Developing Online Content: The Principles of Writing and Editing for the Web. New York, NY: John Wiley & Sons, Inc.
- McGovern, Gerry and Rob Norton. 2001. Content Critical: Gaining Competitive Advantage through High-Quality Web Content. Harlow, Essex, UK: Pearson Education.
- McGovern, Gerry, Rob Norton, and Catherine O’Dowd. 2001. The Web Content Style Guide: An Essential Reference. Harlow, Essex, UK: Pearson Education.
- Price, Jonathan and Lisa. 2002. Hot Text: Web Writing that Works. Indianapolis, IN: New Riders Press.
- Usborne, Nick. 2002. Networds: Creating High-Impact Online Copy. New York, NY: McGraw-Hill.
25 Tips for Better Web Writing
by John Wooden, Director of Usability Services
Drawing on the recent work of Jonathan and Lisa Price and
Nick Usborne, the research of usability experts such as Jakob Nielsen,
and our own experience, we have compiled this list of 25 tips for writing
online. This is the bread and butter stuff that everyone writing for web
sites and e-newsletters should know.
Brevity
- Cut any paper-based text by 50%.
But don’t cut so much that your words lose all meaning and personality.
And don’t cut so much that your words become ambiguous.
- Make each paragraph short.
If possible, keep paragraphs to two or three lines.
- Delete marketing happy talk and hyperbole. Be direct, honest, and
sincere.
- Keep to the main point.
If information is not relevant, delete it. If it is important, but not
directly related, move it elsewhere and link to it. Also consider "sidebars."
- Write in the active voice.
Scannability
- Keep each paragraph to one main idea.
- Put your conclusion or lead idea in the first paragraph of the article.
- Avoid colons, semi-colons, and apostrophes. (They are hard to spot
on screen.)
- Use tables, charts, or graphs to present repeating information.
- Turn any series into a bulleted or numbered list.
- Use titles that are clear enough to identify the contents of
the page.
Make sure that menu labels match page titles.
- Use meaningful subheadings to help visitors scan pages.
- Use bold to highlight what is important.
Effective links
- Place links at the ends of sentences wherever possible, rather than
in the middle of sentences.
- Provide clues so visitors know what they will get when they click
a link.
- Avoid using "click here" and "click to." Don’t
point to your links. "Shift the focus from the links to the subject" (Price and
Price).
- Link to external sites when relevant.
- Point to what’s new with special links.
Good manners
- Write clear, memorable URLs.
Try to keep your URL short and predictable, and avoid special characters.
- If you redesign your site, make sure that you set up redirects on
your server so people who click bookmarked links can get to the new
pages.
- Tell visitors how large a media object is before they start downloading
it.
- To optimize searching, use keywords in your page titles and body
copy, and use the meta keyword tag. Add a page description in the meta tag.
- Write alternate text for images.
- Confirm a visitor’s location by showing the position of the page
they are viewing in the overall hierarchy.
- Write each menu so it offers a meaningful structure.